Yesterpeople Comments

It is haunting to think of someone's former presence draining away. A house as container for dwindling memories is uncannily presented.

Another comment from PoetrySoup 'Well done, Clive.'

PoetrySoup 'you wrote such an outstanding poem, Clive, filled with mystery conveyed with some outstanding images. I loved 'faces trapped in the windows held in a mist.' There's a certainly metaphorical reference here that I really like. The title 'yesterpeople' was perfect.'

Another from PoetrySoup 'You have a unique way with weaving thoughts. Pleasure reading this.'

I put this poem on PoetrySoup, here's a comment "Faces trapped in windows" what a strong line is that! Conveys so much. I love the depth of this poem and how descriptive it is along with that last line which stands out for me. Truly! '