Sunday, August 4, 2019

Yesterdays Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

yesterday's cascade into todays
no turn off switch they tumble into place
the cause, a word, a scene no explanation given
avalanche covering, defences smashed down
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John A'Hern
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Jane Campion 04 August 2019

This insightful poem shows us the cascade of thoughts that never slow down. Brilliantly executed, dear John.

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John Ahern 05 August 2019

Thank you for your kind comments, Jane Campion. Long live comments, without them we will never understand what other poets think of our poems.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 August 2019

The uninterrupted train of thoughts crossing over from yesterday to today in one's mind creates a lot of confusions and restlessness. A wonderful and innovative theme s also the poetic expression.a Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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John Ahern 05 August 2019

A thank you for your comment, Ratnakar Mandlik.

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