yesterday's cascade into todays
no turn off switch they tumble into place
the cause, a word, a scene no explanation given
avalanche covering, defences smashed down
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The uninterrupted train of thoughts crossing over from yesterday to today in one's mind creates a lot of confusions and restlessness. A wonderful and innovative theme s also the poetic expression.a Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This insightful poem shows us the cascade of thoughts that never slow down. Brilliantly executed, dear John.
Thank you for your kind comments, Jane Campion. Long live comments, without them we will never understand what other poets think of our poems.