Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Yesterday Too (Revised) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday returning to
Poppy's Garden
it was a beautiful day
spring flowers were in
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Heather Burns
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

Beautiful poem..Lovely memories of good old times..Your poems are wonderful..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 August 2013

be the best that you can be. Wonderful poem. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 21 August 2013

Lovely nostalgic poem Heather - enjoyed reading.

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Aswath Raman 21 August 2013

Excellent write ma'am! A glimpse of past run through my eyes and looking back, there is nothing but satisfaction and the sense of missing the good old times! I really loved it. And thanks for your sweet comments!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 21 August 2013

she would trade tomorrow For another yesterday. poetic excellence!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 August 2013

An adorable fab poem in lovely rhymin as pretty as yor pic! :) warmest wishes

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Lucifera Santez 21 August 2013

memories, they are interesting things. anyway i loved it. and as usual 10 for it too. and thanks for the comments. :)

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Shahzia Batool 21 August 2013

a gripping scene: for a moment I was taken back visions of the past flooded my mind once again a small girl sat on her poppy's lap

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