Tuesday, July 14, 2015

Yesterday, Someone Set Fire To The Old Sky Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sparkling, all his children died,
slowly scattered on earth as ash
Yesterday, someone set fire to the old sky
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rathod vaishakh
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Chinedu Dike 19 July 2015

A narrative piece of poetry depicting tragic consequence of exploitation and slavery of poor by the rich and powerful. A well articulated poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 14 July 2015

A nicely written and important editorial

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Rathod Vaishakh 16 July 2015

thanks..i am extremely happy that you read it...

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 July 2015

I've enjoyed reading your poem, Rathod. Thanks for sharing and.. WELCOME at PH! :)

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Rathod Vaishakh 16 July 2015

thanks..i am extremely happy that you enjoyed it...

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Rathod Vaishakh 16 July 2015

thanks that you enjoyed it

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Rathod Vaishakh 16 July 2015

thanks a lot...

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Jasbir Chatterjee 14 July 2015

very nice poem; the pain and suffering of the exploited tribals are expressed very poignantly.

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Rathod Vaishakh 16 July 2015

thank you very much..

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