Thursday, May 1, 2014

Yesterday's Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday's rain left the earth
with clumsy atmosphere, like it pains.
Leaves in banyan tree still drip
so is my garden sunken in mud,
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Sneha M..
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Jazib Kamalvi 13 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Sneha M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Brian Jani 01 May 2014

This is a good poem sneha keep it up.please check mine out

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Gajanan Mishra 01 May 2014

fine writing, go on submitting, you are welcome to this sight. I invite you to read my poems and say something.

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