Monday, June 1, 2009

# Yesterday's Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The grass is red

where the flowers had fallen from the trees
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Sonya Florentino
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Estrella Baldemosa 27 July 2009

yesterday never ends...very touching!

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How poignant and moving. How the last line blows me away. How I love the way you crafted it. 10 Karin Anderson

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

I cant say it better then Laurie, very well done Sonya and thanks Laurie for saying it for me. Thank you for sharing Sonya, its a pleasure to read your work. :)

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Laurie Hill 02 June 2009

And with the flowers, the memories of yesterday, lay bleeding on the ground........

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Catrina Heart 01 June 2009

soft humid weather that softens also the longing heart................10+++

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Saadat Tahir 01 June 2009

hi sonya very neat little piece touchy and enjoyable cheers

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

'It rains from dusk til dawn For you, my love, yesterday never ends' A short and cute composition with nice idea. 10+++

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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