Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Yesterday's Promises Comments

Rating: 5.0

Although
One Day it would...
The Sun has never set, for ever.
The moon has never betrayed,
...
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Robert Murray Smith 05 May 2018

The song of a romantic poet.+++10 Rbert

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alan brown 20 April 2018

thank you for posting this poem Subhas, enjoyed reading Alan

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 September 2017

What a beautiful poem on pure, passionately craved love.

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

Far from your soul mate, Who- Promised to be with, within And without You, Here or there, This or That far! Nice poem shared. Thanks poet. 10+++

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D Priyanka Singh 22 September 2017

When you talked to my heart, When you whispered into my ears, When you sang in my name, When you wrote to me each day, When you kissed my worries away, When you predicted my dangers, When you felt them all strangers, When you blew with the breezes, When you flew over the bridges That separated or tried to Keep us away, alien, at bay! ! Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing,10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 08 June 2016

When you talked to my heart, When you whispered into my ears, When you sang in my name, When you wrote to me each day, When you kissed my worries away, When you predicted my dangers, When you felt them all strangers, When you blew with the breezes, When you flew over the bridges That separated or tried to Keep us away, alien, at bay! ! Wow..beauty of expression. Lovely poem. Thanks poet.

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Anita Aparajita Das 16 May 2016

They were there, all along... When you talked to my heart, When you whispered into my ears, When you sang in my name, When you wrote to me each day, When you kissed my worries away, When you predicted my dangers, When you felt them all strangers, When you blew with the breezes, When you flew over the bridges Ah beautiful.. since when have you ventured into this, Subhas? Love it and a rating of 10 out of 10. Nitu

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

The Sun has never set, for ever! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks for the lovely and inspiring remarks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 28 April 2016

They were there, all along... When you talked to my heart, When you whispered into my ears, When you sang in my name, When you wrote to me each day, When you kissed my worries away, When you predicted my dangers, When you felt them all strangers, When you blew with the breezes, When you flew over the bridges That separated or tried to Keep us away, alien, at bay! Felt much excited to read the stanza, I remember some moments of the past That gave this type of feeling. Thank you Sir for getting me back to the past. I rate it as 10.

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