Monday, June 22, 2009

Yesterday's Moments...Today's Tears* Comments

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Yesterday I felt something that I never felt before,
For the first time I felt lonley and depressed.
But today the feeling is gone,
but yet today is the day I have tears.
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Rebeckah Schroeder
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Sayz LFlynn 01 July 2009

Another brilliant poem, captures my thoughts! keep writing!

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i agree with shay, very moving, and i aslo loved it, i also understand those feelings..... and never could put it into words...... greate write, and deffinately keep going!

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Shay Riggin 22 June 2009

a very moving piece of work! i loved every second of this! I to understand this feeling.. but never could put it into words! but you did a lovely job! ! keep going!

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