Monday, February 22, 2010

Yesterday's Dreams. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rolling thunderously into sight
yesterday's dreams
wrap themselves tightly
around the heart,
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Fay Slimm
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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 March 2010

or yesterday'dreams are there to help allay future fear and bear bravely the weight of today....................brilliant write, yet introspective by the philosophy of walking over path of journey and just to sway being allayed on niche of dust, wrought ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Ron Flowers 23 February 2010

Another wonderful and insightful poem, Fay. A ten from me. Ron

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Ian Bowen 22 February 2010

Fay, lots to like in your well written piece.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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