Yesterday On Bus Comments

you revealed world of beauty and peace in a rival world where people talking from heart their own you painted out in this how they are strong in their position as their eyes, in lips, and hands talk/ thanks to share

See the pity..and you have painted so beautifully..their pain splashes on my soul i am feeling yet nice bhai :)

The deaf and dumb also have a language, may be different from ours! Still they are able to communicate their thoughts and they too converse in their own way! Journeying in a bus or train helps us to come across with people of different levels and type! Each bus journey is a new experience! Nice write!

Very nice poem about yesterday's bus journey. Very beautifully explained everything with proper vision and mark.

I love it! A great poem. Makes you want to get off the bus and follow those old guys to learn more about them.