Wednesday, May 31, 2023

Yesterday Night, I Saw A Dream ~ Comments

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Yesterday night, I saw a dream ~
the stars were descending from the sky,
and I was attempting to grasp them,
with my both hands spread out -
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M. Asim Nehal
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S H 01 June 2023

There is a typo in second last line. Perfect poem Full Stars with all appreciation.

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M. Asim Nehal 01 June 2023

Thank u so much for pointing out the typo, I corrected it now.

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Sheeya Hacks 01 June 2023

Even dreams reflects human greed. ✨

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Rajan T Renganathan 31 May 2023

No one knows where but stars disappears. Nicely worded poem, deserve all stars.

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