Monday, October 27, 2008

Yesterday Night I Had A Dream... Comments

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Yesterday night I had a dream,
A dream in which we were together
Got blessed by a thousand angels
And you were beaut n soft as a feather…
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Ankit Mathur
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Greenwolfe 1962 27 October 2008

I must be candid and tell you that you don't write very well . This is going to be a long hard task for you . There is no reason to give up , but I will urge you to wait till your vocabulary and language are expanded. A dictionary is a critical purchase for you . Good luck ! GW62

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