Yesterday Is Gone Comments

My life's fruitless too. Good work. Keep writing

your confession is a matter of great pride. but how can u say that ur life is fruitless. every creation has some fruit that so God has sent us all with some reason. There is a good flow in ur poem. i would suggest you to keep it up.this will be the best achievement of your life. best wish is always with u.

Well expressed thoughts in your poem. The poem speaks of despondency and uselessness. I always found the best way out of depression is to become useful to someone else in need. Visit or call a sick friend. Help with a project in the community. Raid another ship! Oh! there I go being a pirate again. Keep feeling and writing.