Thursday, September 19, 2013

Yesterday...I Was With You Comments

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I am sorry
Deeply from my heart
Do you know today? my dear
I broke your favorite cup...(don't be angry)
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 June 2018

A beautiful poem with touching expression in favour of Valerie, your favourite writer in this website has been astutely depicted. I quote...... If yesterday never went away Sure I am here, here still with you Looking the full moon But yesterday has died so all of us will soon But I know someday Somewhere in a new place We'll meet again... Like yesterday When i was with you Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 27 March 2018

A very beautiful poem, Soul. What you capture is the essence, that part of any person, deeply loved, that stays a living part of our lives- -always. A profound work, Soul.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2013

'But yesterday has died so all of us will soon But I know someday Somewhere in a new place We'll meet again... Like yesterday When i was with you' So beautifully said! It's an amazing expression of empathy for a fellow poet, placing oneself in her shoes in her difficult time. My heartfelt condolences to Valerie May God be with her.

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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2013

this is a beautiful touching write very emotional. Recalling many a yesterday. But it will never be repeated. my second read 10

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Rekha Mandagere 02 October 2013

This is a stage and we are all actors. After our role gets over, we take an exit by giving chance for other actors to play their significant roles. This cycle goes on. Ultimately those who met yesterday will meet again in future. Let us conduct our duties and take an exit from this world. Soul you have artistically handled the situation. My love is always with valerie.

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Shahzia Batool 30 September 2013

a complete self-negation of the poet makes such writes possible...and here you did not bother for the facts and figures but tried to lend a touch of creativity and originality of your own...written with a feel, read with a feel too! ! !

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Ruby Mostazir 29 September 2013

got emotional......... : - (

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Unbreakable Heart 29 September 2013

That so sad :) ... Hope Val is okay now and she's trying reach out the pain that she felt~! I like this poem.. :)

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 September 2013

Emotional poem written beautifully Soul, our condolences go out to Valerie and her family during this trying time. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

You have accomplished everything you have set out to do. Val will be very pleased I am sure. A touching read

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Abhishek Mishra 25 September 2013

An emotional poem written beautifully...loved it: -)

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Farah Ilyas 23 September 2013

your poem brought tears in my eyes, no one surely will take one's place Valerie, but hope He vl be always with you in the form of beautiful memories..isn, t it? indeed touching n moving poem. conveys more than its saying.

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Lucifera Santez 22 September 2013

a tragic symphony. wonderful work. :)

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Neela Nath Das 22 September 2013

A beautiful poem on loss and bereavement.Love Soul.

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Princess Lilypad 22 September 2013

this is so sad, well spoken about loss and grief of yesteryear love. thank you for writing!

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Lyn Paul 21 September 2013

These are very special words Soul. The tears could have filled a tea cup. Words that would have moved Valerie yet given her such strength, simply because of your beautiful words and care Thank you

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Susan Lacovara 21 September 2013

I loved this poem, my friend, Soul...so well expressed, sent shivers down my spine. Keep the beauty that is shared poetry coming. PEACE and plenty under the full moon we are gifted.

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Valerie Dohren 20 September 2013

Beautifully expressed Soul, you have captured the essence of bereavement so well. It is a privilege that you are my friend, and I thank you, I am humbled indeed.

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Nader Baheri 20 September 2013

knowing that we will meet our beloved someday after death is really soothing for the one who has to keep his or her living on. peace be upon him ~nb

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Kee Thampi 20 September 2013

omething like this....i never read best love it

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