Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Yesterday And Today Comments

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Yesterday I was sick and
Moon was far from my window
I called you that it was full of dark
Miss you very-
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Musfiq us shaleheen
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James Safi 20 November 2013

very nice poem. simple but awesome. i liked the way you represent your views. keep writing..

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Payal Parande 14 November 2013

i love it the juggling of words yet they are so well pinned..brilliant

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2013

the poem have picturesque value/ I told you, I am sound and moon shimmers at my window// lovely thank you

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Sallam Yassin 12 November 2013

Yes everyday is a new day with new stand and new stanza/ bright

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