Yesterday And Today Comments

I know its been over a decade since this poem was published. But i relare 1000 % great stuff man

Her presence makes all the difference between yesterday and today. Liked it.

Brushing aside darkness and moving towards light. Everyone has a right to live their own life rather than be submissive and be spurned like a cur.To break out from such a relationship requires courage. Well penned Thanks

The difference between yesterday and today the poets well about his lady in this poem. He was miserable before, but after seeing her he has gained confidence he says he is sure!

I love how you progressively become stronger with the develpment of this poem Sheldon, taking back your power until finally - you are in charge. This is the kind of poem that can give hope to everyone feeling weak and destroyed. Time is a great healer, there is always light at the end of the tunnel and you express it so honestly and positively here.

nice style of rhyme and meter you have here.... i think it's kinda unique

C'etait SUPER! ! .> It was super :) :) You amaze me everytime you write.. Love it...10.. + + hehe :) 'Yesterday and Today' - AWESOME READ.. p.s Im emo gone Bright lol.. Nice positivity: L: P: D

I like your poem 'Yesterday and Today' used as a metaphor for personal change...a 10

Keep up the good spirit, Sheldon. Best Wishes.