Monday, September 22, 2008

Yesterday Comments

Rating: 4.4

Yesterday,
A string had broken from my left hand,
A string that had bound me for a long time,
That had became one with my flesh.
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Yesterday, It is the end of everything, And the beginning of the ending...... it is so touchy and thoughtful poem.. yesterday is the end of begining.. whata theme i like the ideas...10 read mine yes to to, , mary to marry and miss i miss you along with o, mother

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nomad omnia 17 March 2009

Wow! :)

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Hazem Al Jaber 31 January 2009

yesyerday is gone.. and now another day.. we all should thinks about the coming not about what left.. so beautiful dear sweet poet.. i really liked it soo.. yours, , hazem al..

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 January 2009

lovely piece beautifully written......touching... yesterday is the fruit of today..... we learn to grow because of the bitter-sweet yesterday.... 10++++

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Kesav Easwaran 27 October 2008

from a broken string of yesterday to a hopeful new day...good piece, Lily 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

'Yesterday, It is the end of everything, And the beginning of the ending.' Marvelous. Love it. 10+

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Poornima Kanasen 03 October 2008

Hey, gurl, Nicely written. I loved it... 'The pain was unbearable, The freedom was sweet, But the consequences were undefined.' I like those words...worth sacrificing for a sweet escape, taking present into consideration and let future flow as it is meant to........ Keep up your gud work.. K.Poornima..

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Roy Storey 02 October 2008

Yesterday is gone and tomorrow never comes, but i love your poem it has that free feeling.

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Ency Bearis 29 September 2008

a very nice poetic expression..nice to read...well done.. Ency Bearis

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 September 2008

This was still more symbolic than I like, but I can recommend it because I believe I do understand it. GW62

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Aiswarya. T.anish 27 September 2008

it is a very beautiful poem. i liked reading it i like the lines 'a string that had broken from my left hand, a string that had binded me for a long time...' a very nice poem

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Colin Jeffery 27 September 2008

A delightful poem by a very good poet.

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Ershad Mazumder 25 September 2008

Thanks dear Lily for such an excellant piece. This is really very poetic.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 September 2008

Yesterday, all my troubles seem so far away..............but tomorrow never dies.nice piece Lily! !

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Manonton Dalan 23 September 2008

very lovely poem. i'm asking myself what could be the connection between the string and you. thanks md

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 September 2008

nice style of expression indeed............10

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Lily Law

Lily Law

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