Yesterday,
A string had broken from my left hand,
A string that had bound me for a long time,
That had became one with my flesh.
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yesyerday is gone.. and now another day.. we all should thinks about the coming not about what left.. so beautiful dear sweet poet.. i really liked it soo.. yours, , hazem al..
lovely piece beautifully written......touching... yesterday is the fruit of today..... we learn to grow because of the bitter-sweet yesterday.... 10++++
from a broken string of yesterday to a hopeful new day...good piece, Lily 10
'Yesterday, It is the end of everything, And the beginning of the ending.' Marvelous. Love it. 10+
Hey, gurl, Nicely written. I loved it... 'The pain was unbearable, The freedom was sweet, But the consequences were undefined.' I like those words...worth sacrificing for a sweet escape, taking present into consideration and let future flow as it is meant to........ Keep up your gud work.. K.Poornima..
Yesterday is gone and tomorrow never comes, but i love your poem it has that free feeling.
a very nice poetic expression..nice to read...well done.. Ency Bearis
This was still more symbolic than I like, but I can recommend it because I believe I do understand it. GW62
it is a very beautiful poem. i liked reading it i like the lines 'a string that had broken from my left hand, a string that had binded me for a long time...' a very nice poem
Thanks dear Lily for such an excellant piece. This is really very poetic.
Yesterday, all my troubles seem so far away..............but tomorrow never dies.nice piece Lily! !
very lovely poem. i'm asking myself what could be the connection between the string and you. thanks md
Yesterday, It is the end of everything, And the beginning of the ending...... it is so touchy and thoughtful poem.. yesterday is the end of begining.. whata theme i like the ideas...10 read mine yes to to, , mary to marry and miss i miss you along with o, mother