Saturday, February 16, 2008

Yesterday Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yesterday was a heavy day.
No rest from the night
Or the day before.
Like house paint
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Fred Babbin
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Crystal Pongi 09 December 2008

W0W! sorry but ur poems r FANTASTIC! cn u do a another one! PLEASE!

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Richard Blanch 03 December 2008

And what matching heaviness in those 'or' sounds and 'w' consonants. Yes- evaporation is to be wished for often!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

A moving composition of emotion. I love it,10+

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Mark Nwagwu 14 September 2008

those things you should ignore - there's no end to it - like getting irritated over little things; wishing your teeth were whiter; arthritis in your index finger; so many things we should ignore, from yesterday, and wish they would vanish, evaporate. that's what makes life so so exciting, for it all makes us realise we are mere mortals. Thanks, Fred, I'm strong again. Mark

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Mary Gordley 16 February 2008

Oh my. Wishing you paint thinner for the morrow.

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Love it, and can relate. t x

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