Yesterday. Poem by Ging Taping

Yesterday.

Rating: 5.0


leave the pain of yesterday
leave the worries of yesteryear
welcome the day of tomorrow
although morrow is in the first row
and the vision doesn't exist
still aspire for the best.

Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 05 November 2016

i don't write Haiku, but i thought they only had three lines. and there are other characteristics of Haiku this may not follow, though times change and definitions change as well. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2016

though morrow is in the row ...............not though row is in the morrow? ? by using row, did you mean: noun \ˈrau̇Definition of row : a noisy disturbance or quarrel Or: 4 a: a continuous strip usually running horizontally or parallel to a baseline b: a horizontal arrangement of items - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - or some other definition? a nice upbeat (or trying to be upbeat) poem. bri :)

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Ging Taping 13 November 2016

other definition of row.. synonyms: line, column, file, queue; procession, chain, string, succession mor·row ˈmôrō, ˈmärō/ nounarchaicliterary noun: morrow the following day. on the morrow, they attacked the city the time following an event. in the morrow of great victory, will they show some equanimity? the near future. we have the religious enthusiast who takes no thought for the morrow Origin

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 March 2016

Yes! Hoping for the best. Nice work.

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Simone Inez Harriman 01 March 2016

An optimistic poem that reminds me to look forward to a great tomorrow which is more likely attainable without the pain and worries of yesterday.

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