Monday, August 18, 2014

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Last night,
Was not my best night.
No,
It was filled with dark, cold fright.
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Daniel Brick 19 August 2014

That is a great closing line, one that truly resonates beyond the limits of the poem it concludes. It's a very challenging question because the implication is we SHOULD plan who we are so that we don't just bounce around, but act with purpose. I like the flow of this poem. It begins in doldrums, gradually brightens and ends with this assertion of a much better tomorrow! Give this poem to a friend sometime when s/he needs a boost!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 August 2014

What a constructive way to deal with one's own life! Good thinking.

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

Sana Olivia Hernandez

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