Friday, January 16, 2009

Yes, Yes, We All Can… Comments

Rating: 4.8

(Dedicated to Our Brother President)

Yes, yes, We all can stop the violence,
Stop all non-sense,
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Marama Kelly 22 September 2009

Thanks for sharing. This has a good flow and clear imagery from beginning to end. It is well expressed and has a rythmn that draws the reader to become intertwined with what they are reading. Well done. The message you have shared in this is awesome and you are so right. Thanks again and many blessings to you

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 August 2009

Good optimism. Well thought. Nicely written.

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 16 August 2009

hmmm another fantastic write my friend very expressive....meaningful^^

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Sandhya S N 14 August 2009

positive attitude drenched lines.. regards sandhya

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Ninya Zulueta 13 August 2009

if all nations can read this, ... nice poem.if all would realize this and commit it to hearts, what a bright world this will be.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 August 2009

i like the title and so is the last line.

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Mubeen Sadhika 12 August 2009

Nice poem. Beautifully written.

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 August 2009

yes we all can, well write dear Hebert

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LuvTika Merchant 10 August 2009

wonderfully written +10

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Christina Phan 09 August 2009

Wonderful write Your writing are such inspiriation Kept it up 10+++

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Ruerd Visser 09 August 2009

Nice one to read greatly inspiring, Let´s make it happen! May angels greet you Boomfriend Ruerd

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Michelle Kafka 08 August 2009

I find a great spirit and message in this poem. Now if only we all thought and acted this way everyone would probably be happier and positive. Great job on this humanitarian poem! Thanks for sharing.

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yellowbell alamanda 06 August 2009

we should say 'Yes' to every possible things that can make as one in this universe....

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Whitney t 05 August 2009

Yes, Yes, we can stop all the things wrong in the world.....if we come together as one....but love the poem...outstanding.....very postive poem and it's very meaningful

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Ellen Frawley 05 August 2009

i like as said before lovely and positive lots of sprit

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