Saturday, December 22, 2018

Yes Mr. Crow Comments

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Crows what have you to say?
Rustling, jostling, so loud so sure
In noisy shrieks of urgency
You the raven fantasy
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Edmund Strolis
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Glen Kappy 19 February 2019

edmund, since last reading this poem of yours i've written two more in which crows make an appearance if you'd want to take a look—crow talk and so soon. -glen

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Glen Kappy 04 January 2019

hey, edmund! came looking and glad to find a new posting by you. and this one, these creatures, a subject i've attempted several times. the only one i've kept so far is titled simply, crows, if you'd want to look it up here in ph. in the last stanza of yours i particularly like the last four lines—good stuff in which you summon what i think of as archetypal symbols. wishing you the best of the best in 2019, glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 December 2018

Moonlight seeks a shadow., an amazing and brilliant poem is well penned. Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us.10

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