Tuesday, October 30, 2007

Yes, I Do Comments

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I take full responsibility for
what I’m about to write, which is
that when she eats chocolate, some
ends up in a corner of her mouth.
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Hans Ostrom
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Tom J. Mariani 14 July 2008

Yes it is a love poem; unabated and unabashed. Sounds like you two are some that, as I say in my poem 'Lovers Leap' for whom... 'life is more than fair.'/ Tom

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