Yes Grandpapa Yes. Comments

Fear is in every man and will haunt him all of his life. if e could control our fears this world would be a peaceful place. loved your poem Kumarmani

i'll make just one 'grammar' suggestion: Instead of In eager they said......i'd use: In eagerness they said or They said eagerly Grandfather (and teacher) have give good advice to the children. bri :)

Is the age sixty of a person ripe? Yes! Ripe life is beautiful!

A lovingly conveyed message about why we must shun greed, the evil that destroys our social fabric. The poem also tells children to respect their elders always and also pray to God. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

What a great poem! wonderful words of wisdom by a grandfather to his grandchildren.

Listening to the wisdom of our Grandparents are crucial and in this poem you speak of a Grandfather, and that's wonderful...Excellent poem.....

You can tuna piano but you cant tuna fish.

Greed is a big problem in the world today, but your wonderful poem teaches well that greed is not good. Good lesson for grandpas to teach the young ones that they may know the difference.

This poem is a teaching in better way in step or in rhythm in a beautiful manner with lovely note -the greed is wonderfully described and this poem must be read and make children to read and recite very nice poem sir

beautiful write from the side of a grand father......nice description sir.....

a child knows not what's greed........................great poem, sir.........................the entire poem is heart-touching.........thanks

A very nice poem with a message against greediness. The last stanza i liked best. Tnx.