A painted on expression
Of a hapless root cause
An etched on memory
Forever bleeding sores
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When the cause gives bleeding this provokes thought. The expression etches on memory. A sensitive poem is wonderfully penned. This is wonderful...10
I'd go with " etched-on" . to MyPoemList. i like it. how many such disgruntled looks have been caused by me? but, i have excuses! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri :)