Sunday, January 28, 2007

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An echo from the dark green shore
now permeates each open pore,
from murky depths and plankton's slime
a spark ignites of active lime.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Gina Onyemaechi 28 January 2007

The bouncy rhythm and rhyme does not obscure the poem's underlying dark tone. Am I wrong in thinking that this piece stems from the...family matters that you're having to deal with, Herbs? G.

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