Friday, November 22, 2013

Yellowed Pages Comments

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Yellowed pages; Thin and frail.
Yellowed pages; Tell my tale.
Yellowed pages; Keep my secrets.
Hiding in plain sight
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Brookelyn Walker
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Brookelyn Walker 24 November 2013

Thanks for the feedback but that was actually intentional. I reservesed and ended it for a short and sweet poem about a book. Who in the world would want to read a paragraph about a tiny book I kept for only a year and a half?

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Khairul Ahsan 24 November 2013

'Yellowed pages; Thin and frail. Yellowed pages; Tell my tale' Beautifully begun, but you seem to have lost the steam midway..

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