Thursday, November 18, 2004

Yellow Comments

Rating: 4.3

Yellow is the sun of childhood
the certain day
the fine silk strands
of youthful years
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Terence Collings 19 January 2015

Sublimely developed...like the colour. Nuanced shades at every level. Rich and vibrant. Not wishy washy Like yellow as a disappearing follow.

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Claudia Moline 20 January 2012

Excellent. Thanks for all your poems, specially these colour ones!

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Emily Oldham 19 October 2008

brilliant... easily as good as 'blue'. your description and imagery of colours is amazing... keep writing!

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Jerry Hughes 28 February 2007

...one word - excellent

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Patricia Gale 04 June 2006

I humbly bow to the Lady of Colors! Splendid read. Your magic shines with this color. Patricia Gale

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Scarborough Gypsy 30 March 2005

Philippa, This was absolutely wonderful and definately my favourite out of your 'colour' poems. Very, very clever. You should be extremely proud of it. SG

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Philippa Lane

Philippa Lane

Chichester, West Sussex, England
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