Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Yellow Roadroller Comments

Rating: 4.5

He stands there sadly in a street corner
Rust eating metal, fading yellow colour
Possibly years back quite many
He'd have trundled but majestically
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Padmanabhan Ananth
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Padmanabhan Ananth 29 January 2014

Thanks Geetha. I noticed this lone abandoned machine under a streetlight one night and that scene somehow evoked pain in me. Sometimes, sadly even some elders are treated this way.

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Padmanabhan Ananth 29 January 2014

Thanks Bhavna. I appreciate and welcome your feedback.

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Padmanabhan Ananth 29 January 2014

Thanks Bhavna. I appreciate and welcome your feedback.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 January 2014

Beautiful poem on Yellow Roadroller. You have captured in your words very well. Loved reading it.

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Bhavna Singh 16 January 2014

superlike lines sir....

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