Monday, July 20, 2009

Yellow River Never Meets The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

A yellow river flows
Through my bloods.

I know the colours of the rain
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Braja K Sarkar
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Abhinav Baruah 07 March 2010

Mind boggling metaphor.... 10+ Read mine.. 'Twisted Sunset'...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 November 2009

Mystic imagery ‘Yellow river inside me’ Wow! Ten+ Ms. Nivedita. UK Please find new posts and looking for your comments. niv

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Marieta Maglas 27 July 2009

nice complex (cognitive, visual) metaphor: ''Yellow river inside me Flows silently, '' of this wonderful poem.......10

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Lady Grace 21 July 2009

'Yellow river inside me Flows silently, It never meets the sea I have ever known.'...... mysterious river runs deep in your veins..

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an interesting beautiful poem..with beautiful images..

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very gripping...........

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Braja K Sarkar

Braja K Sarkar

Calcutta, India
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