Thursday, September 2, 2021

Yellow Pimpernel. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Creeping merrily twix affable leaf
in search of her morning aperitif
this vision with the brightest of eye
smiles as she teases the Sun in the sky.
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john (called jack) wren
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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 September 2021

I ever heard of the Red Pimpernel, but the yellow? A very thought-provoking poem, which flower is this?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 September 2021

Four loveliest stanzas, most pleasurable read, excellent end rhymes and rhythm 5 Stars full, Jack Sir!

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