Thursday, June 23, 2011

Yellow Passion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shining down like the sun
Filling the room with warmth
Something I have never felt before
The smell calms the body
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Courtney Shanahan
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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