Yellow November Comments

From: Gabrielle Love (Atlanta United States; Female; 16) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/1/2009 3: 01: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) of course wats inspires to write the way you do its amazing

beautiful....... 10+

nice poem...good job 10

Very old write but even today its still remains fresh in hearts of new beats. Well composed.

You have the gift of giving yourself away in words. This is the mark of the true poet. Kind wishes, Sandra

know, I “m not able to see you again And, I know, I “m not able to forget you Please, separate me from that strange world of train And take me as far as possible with you. written in 1984 Some memories last forever and it feels like you are ever standing on the platform...waiting for that train...rise or fall...in all seasons that change, your season never changed.

I think of trains in terms of motion, either going somewhere or returning from someplace; And yet by the distance there still appears to be a close connection, the train joining the points. Memory ever present never vanished.