Sunday, October 9, 2016
Yellow Moon/Black Nite Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Sometimes can't tell left from right,
Trying hard to survive, do the best to stay alive.
Need You God to Guide my soul, Your path I wish to
know! So much to learn, can't afford another wrong
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Unwritten Soul
10 October 2016
I love the way you write this one like a healing monologue..it feels freedom flying from our mind and heart...free from heartache
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8/6/2025 2:27:10 AM # 1.0.0
You have a very unique style and it fits you and your message. I think this style fits the struggle going on and then whirling back on itself and then surging on again. There is threads of many things going on here- the image of the yellow moon in the black night, the vacillation of the recovery process, the reaching out to God, the self-encouragement and its strength, then despair, then.... A very charismatic poem about the heartache of alcoholism. Very well done. And so worth the doing. God bless you, Rebecca. 10.
Thank You! ! ! For Such Heart in Such a Kind and Thoughtful response! ! ! God Bless! ! !