Wednesday, October 22, 2008
Yellow Kiss Comments
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Swaying forward and back
In the soft wind
Light reflects off the petal
That pastes a yellow glow
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7/31/2025 11:19:18 PM # 1.0.0
I like this one. It's so pretty yet meaningful. I like the word 'pastes' but I don't think it's the right word to use in that situation - you should look for a word that insinuates a more gentle touch, like 'projects, ' 'reflects, ' etc. But something prettier-sounding than those words. (Sorry for the bad suggestions.) And you spelled 'petal' wrong - you wrote 'peddle' instead.