Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Yellow Flowers Comments

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I silently gasp as the paper flutters to the floor
Is this a signal of the end?
the last pictures, our last hour?
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Bjorn Visser
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Painted with a beautiful inductive ink that captivates.

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Painted with a beautiful inductive ink that captivates.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

Very nice poem. I love it.

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Bob Blackwell 23 August 2008

You have a talent far beyond your years, english may not be your mother tongue but you write in it with both style and verve. Keep writing you will become a star.

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Jurietta Duraan 19 August 2008

Hierdie gedig is ongelooflik mooi - dit sal 'n great liriek vir 'n Prime Circle song maak.... soos Dewald se... baie indrukwekkend.

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Dewald Viljoen 19 August 2008

Ek het al jou gedigte gelees Herman. Baie indrukwekkend.

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Bjorn Visser

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