Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Yellow Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

he stared at me with his yellow eyes,
honest orbs that held no lies.
he wasn't scared, that I could see,
As those yellow eyes, bore into me.
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Juan Olivarez
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Karen Sinclair 09 July 2012

What an exceptional perceptive and raw write, no funny stuff, no over expressing just the good hard facts enhanced by your keen eye...lovely tyvm karen

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Smoky Hoss 28 June 2012

Juan, you know how I love your desert-poetry, and this one is right there along side the rest; I swear I could see him too.................. awesome pal.

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Atasha Williams 23 March 2016

Me toooo lol

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Eric Cockrell 22 June 2012

well written... could see and feel your images, as if i were there!

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Heather Wilson 20 June 2012

A really brilliant poem, such an interesting read, guess that coyote answered the call of the wild as priority, a relief no doubt. love the title.

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