Yellow Desire Comments

Vote Box not found? Why? Still Ten by all heart dr.sakti

'On the valley of your noose A noon was bent differently...' Excellent imagery! Wow! ! Carried forward. Ten++ But how to communicate? No message allowed. Regards dr sakti

astonishing pictograph painted! 10++++

if midnight moon comes close I’ll be a wild flower on hill foot Wonderful....you are capable of telling so many things in so small a space.... 10++++++++++++

Glorious imagery Ashraful and the wild flower did it for me. 10 Karin Anderson

An interesting combination of words and imagery, Wonderful write Ashraful

just as a wildflower on the hill foot of humbleness of desire........well written profound piece.10

wonderful picturesque write...well done...10

..... If midnight moon.... too good for words! The flow carried me along effortlessly! !

A fine write that paints a vivid picture 10++

A treasury of imagery you are in....marvellous

Beautiful there are at you desires, dear Ashraful. The midnight moon perfectly operated on you / with a smile / 10... Thank you...... Tsira

beautiful images in this poem

A blazing sun is on horizon, keep shining! Stunning imageries.

true poet....... mad at heart.................................

amazing desires.. well portrayed..! !

Beautiful images. I love the metaphor of the last line. A wonderfully evocative poem.

penning nature is gift and your yellow desire is outstanding..........

I’ll be a wild flower on hill foot.. excellent expression sir.