Wednesday, February 17, 2021

Yellow Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden blooms lined each side of the highway,
For the exotic places had long been calling.
At last the day came to put those cares away!
You must seize the moment as time is crawling.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Varsha M 17 February 2021

This is a beautiful poetic form you have used. So well executed. Lovely are the golden blooms along the highway and bee and fragrance making wAy. It is refreshing to see this poetic form

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Deluke Muwanigwa 17 February 2021

Great observations of nature in harmony. The flow, the rhymes, the repetition so natural in this lovely piece.

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