Sunday, May 27, 2018

Yellow Curtain Comments

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The curtain in my room is pale yellow,
With golden leaves on it,
My mother lived in this room for a little while,
And left a little bit of her.
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banamala sen
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Bri Edwards 29 June 2018

banamala, this poem shall now be entered, by me, into my July 2018 showcase. thanks. bri :) p.s. i will send you a note to your Inbox on PH, explaining something about my usually-monthly showcases.

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Banamala Sen 27 July 2018

Thanks, Bri. You are very kind.

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Siddartha Montik 18 June 2018

Good write ! ! thank you!

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Banamala Sen 18 June 2018

Thanks, Siddartha! This poem came from my heart when I thought about my Mom. She was a spiritual woman. It's a true story.

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2018

love and life (your topics) ......all in a curtain! and in a very fine Free Verse! The names were countless! .......that's a LOT of names! ! to MyPoemList. bri :) a true story?

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Banamala Sen 17 June 2018

Yes, Bri, it's my true story. My Mother came where I live now, and stayed with me for a few weeks. She was very spiritual, and prayed for not only her own children, but everyone she knew, and she didn't know. Thanks for your comments, and including this poem to your favourite list.

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Banamala Sen 17 June 2018

Yes, Bri, this is a true story. My Mother came where I live now, and stayed for a few days. She was very spiritual, and used to pray for not only her own children, but everyone she knew, and also for people she didn't know. Thanks for asking, and leaving beautiful comments. Many many thanks for including in your favourite poem-list.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 May 2018

In mother's life in family each and every person is precious. Mother prays for goodness of all members. This is very amazingly penned.10

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Banamala Sen 27 May 2018

Thank you so much for your inspiring comment. This was my mother. But I know, this is true for all mothers.

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