Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Yellow Cake Comments

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Nuclear......
The first world war has ended
The world are devided two blocks
The west block and the east block
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Somahadi Hadi
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Marieta Maglas 11 February 2010

Where is love of peacefull? interesting poem, well expressed ideas to convey the message 10

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John Knight 08 February 2010

Hi Somahadi - This is a well structured poem with a powerful message. V 1 I was 12 when the Second World War was ended in 1945 by the USA dropping of two nuclear bombs on Japan. Thousands died instantly and some by a slow death over months and years. There has never been a nuclear war - or a World War since. But we have not had 65 years of PEACE. V 3 All nations - including Japan and the USA - are potential agressors. V 4 The only way we can have Universal peace is if each individual first makes PEACE with their GOD. It will then spread to Comunities to Cities to Nations and then to the whole World. Yours in poetry - JOHN.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 February 2010

Where is love of peacefull? In United States of America? No.. Where is Eternal happiness? In Japan? No..................................quest yet ruffles by queries. life when resounds in pangs of sorrow indeed by wars, let us have love and peace all in our heart itself by path of non-violence, wonderful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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