Sunday, May 29, 2016

Yellow Blossoms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flowering into yellow gaiety
Full of cheery aroma of spring
Trees have the friskiness
Of a maiden fair
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Nosheen Irfan
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 June 2016

And my sweet romance! The beauty of nature is the beauty of love and life. Nice work.

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Daniel Brick 06 June 2016

Another stunning photograph. This is so full of that celebration of renewed life we associatwe with spring. And you fold several themes together: the freshness of nature, the charm of young women, the joy of musicand dance. The word that sums it up is AN ADORATION DEEP. There is something sacred that all this sensuality embodies. It's as if nature reaching its most complete expression in spring also opens the gates and admits a spiritual presence that parallels its physical presence. I feel that union of the physical and the spiritual very strongly in your Poem of Celebration.

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Sranisha Francis 02 June 2016

To imagine thou shall go As all mortal things are wont to do The gift of spring, The ardour of love Thou shall be my morning thought And my sweet romance. So beautifull words.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2016

They flirt with the sunshine They wink at the sky They invite the wind Into the feverish arms of love Yellow blossoms smile............. haiiiiiiiiiiii so beautiful.. i imagine how the yellow flowers flirt with the sun, how they wink, so fine a poem.... beauty in every line... tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 June 2016

Oh Nosheen, Beautiful little poem. More beautiful is accompanying image of flowers: This is the official flower of Kerala, the Kanikkonna in Malayalam.

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Susan Williams 31 May 2016

Very playful, cheerful, frisky tone to this enchanting nature poem. It was a joy to read, it invited me to go outside and enjoy our spring.... and flirt right back at it! ! ! ! Very very nice write! ! !

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Kelly Kurt 29 May 2016

Beautiful poem and picture. My primrose are starting to bloom, and the sea of yellow buoys my heart

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Barry Middleton 29 May 2016

Nosheen, this is perfect. Flowers and beautiful women have a lot in common. The way you develop the metaphor is flawless.

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Bill Cantrell 29 May 2016

Wow, such a nice tribute to nature, wonderful poetry, I just love nature poems and how they affect the heart and mind, if you like, read my poem voice of flowers, again...great poem you have written.

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Nosheen Irfan

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