Saturday, April 29, 2006

Yellow Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’ve been broken
Like a lonely dream
Looking for a mind to enter,
But I follow the footsteps of love
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ernestine Northover 30 April 2006

This is lovely Uriah, and I love the last four lines, they would stand on their own they are so good. Love Ernestine XXX

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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 April 2006

Excellent! Uriah................I too like to be a yellow bird and fly in the sky before they make boundaries and barriers?

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Sandra Fowler 29 April 2006

This poem shines with iits own light. It reminds me of the work of the great Yiddish poet, Menke Katz. It has the same beautiful, everlasting quality. Kind regards, Sandra

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Noemi Lee 29 April 2006

Nice one. I once had a yellow bird.

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