Monday, January 19, 2015

Yellow Comments

Rating: 4.8

The ominous Yellow, conferred us not the benediction;
It roamed the streets with us for years, everywhere;
Persiflage its bestowed Light—prelude to crucifixion;
Chimerical guidance through paths which led no-where.
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Mihaela Pirjol
COMMENTS
Luo Zhihai 01 February 2015

A nice poetry. I like it.

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Valsa George 30 January 2015

Yellow often has inauspicious associations! Yellow jealousy, yellow journalism, neonate jaundice, pale yellow face when tormented with fear.....etc, etc! You have beautifully conveyed the ominous associations of Yellow! A poem much higher than the ordinary! Enjoyed!

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Mohammad Skati 28 January 2015

It's a wonderful poem. I loved it. Thanks.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 January 2015

Hello poet Mihaela. The title of your poem caught my attention, I love the unusual, the unexpected thing, as was your poem. You bring so much to ponder on. My best to you, I enjoyed your poem. Loyd C Taylor

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