Friday, October 9, 2009

Yelling At Me Comments

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regreting this
this unwanted lover
this life
regreting not atempting suicide
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Christine Schmidt 11 October 2009

I think you may have trouble with this one as the agreement doesn't allow some of the word choices you use. This poem is very violent, and I know it talks of great pain, I challenge you to do it with irony and less poisonous words :) ~Christine

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