Resist the temptation to yell
as this expression gets under my skin;
I shudder and my soul is disturbed.
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This isn't bad. The only serious reservation I would have is the fact that yelling could also be deemed as violent. I'd probably give this 4/10. Scott.
My soul does not like yelling as truthfull as symbolic.. looking simple, for some maybe not sophisticated, yet the piece of genuine feel streamed into poetry, at its best!