Saturday, May 14, 2005

Yelling Comments

Rating: 3.6

Resist the temptation to yell
as this expression gets under my skin;
I shudder and my soul is disturbed.
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Anthony Dawson
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Neran Sati 09 November 2015

My soul does not like yelling as truthfull as symbolic.. looking simple, for some maybe not sophisticated, yet the piece of genuine feel streamed into poetry, at its best!

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Scott Mcdonald 15 May 2005

This isn't bad. The only serious reservation I would have is the fact that yelling could also be deemed as violent. I'd probably give this 4/10. Scott.

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