Monday, September 21, 2009

Years Flown By..... Comments

Rating: 4.7

When your fathers old and greying,
when your mothers old and frail,
when they hold their childrens children on their knee,
do they think of years flown by,
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Sonya Florentino 21 September 2009

i guess some loves last forever....!

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Susan Jarvis 21 September 2009

A superbly crafted poem, the rhyme and rhythm flows along with ease, yet above that is the wonderful message - it's a real tribute to a life time of true love. A beautiful poem that speaks from the heart. S :)

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Jean Dament 21 September 2009

A lovely poem that reminds us to remember that old folks still have a lot of love to give yet. In the last line 'their' -should be 'they're' ok. Thanks for sharing your talents. Ravensong

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