Friday, October 12, 2012

Years Comments

Rating: 4.0

We met by chance
on a summer day
We fell in love
to everyones dismay.
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Cherry Kell
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Valerie Dohren 07 November 2012

A very good write, enjoyed the read. You may like to read mine entitled Shattered.

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Perry Biggerstaff 17 October 2012

no longer your shadow Reborn was I. Poetry really starts to work when you can touch a universal experience....We have all been in that place you write about and can appreciate the multitude of emotions that these words unearth. Good job.

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John Brown 13 October 2012

A nice heartfelt poem Cherry. And I'm glad you won out in the end.

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Neela Nath Das 12 October 2012

I read and sat mesmerized. So sonorous! Rhyme and the theme both are awesome.

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I love your poem. Thanks for sharing.

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