We met by chance
on a summer day
We fell in love
to everyones dismay.
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no longer your shadow Reborn was I. Poetry really starts to work when you can touch a universal experience....We have all been in that place you write about and can appreciate the multitude of emotions that these words unearth. Good job.
A nice heartfelt poem Cherry. And I'm glad you won out in the end.
I read and sat mesmerized. So sonorous! Rhyme and the theme both are awesome.
A very good write, enjoyed the read. You may like to read mine entitled Shattered.