Sunday, July 31, 2016

Yearning Passion: A Palindrome Comments

Rating: 5.0

Passion:
Feral fiery feeling
Inside trapped heart,
Yearning…
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Neera Lollbeeharry
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 June 2017

very expressive of passion.......your own way in expressing.. very original. in short verses u are conveying a lot. than k you. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 13 May 2017

A wonderful palindrome! You’ve played with your thoughts, feelings and words so deftly! Not an easy work. Loved it, rated it 10/10.

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

A wonderfully conceived and written poem, Neera. Thanks

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Neera Lollbeeharry 01 August 2016

Thank You Kelly. I love mirrors and playing with words and forms. You write such good poetry on your side too... I particularly like I Don't Know' - A soothing admission of uncertainty in a world of prefabricated affirmations...

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