Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Yearning Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is emptiness
inside my chest.
A smouldering yearning
for something lost, for something
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2018

Is it of this world, or of another world? I hope, one day, it will unveil itself to us.....oh yes, it will unveil itself to us. This is a beautiful poem on love and dream.

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Rajesh Thankappan 31 May 2016

Yearning for something that we cannot figure out is will certainly cause distraught and this feeling it bound to multiply if we don't stop pondering over it. So, I feel, it is better to leave things as it is.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Yearning for something lost! Nice piece of work.

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Hazel Durham 12 April 2016

Sadness with a longing for something that is lost at the core of your being, you search relentlessly in the past for a reason for your melancholy. So beautifully written that touches deep emotions that we all hide from the world but in our thoughts there is always a search for peace and love to complete our journey! Outstanding write!

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